Monday, August 04, 2003, 23:28 GMT
Tom,
They wrote: "example computational complexities of inverting the function"
Since these are instructions, I suppose sentence fragments are excused (although it would sound better). It would perhaps flow better to say...."examples of the inverting function's computational complexities."
They wrote: "People considering this function interesting are encouraged to share their research results with us at vmpc@vmpcfunction.com. Information about all research results and all publications will be, upon consent, published on this website."
I'd say: We encourage those who are interested in this function to share their own research results with us at vmpc@vmpcfunction.com. Information about all research results and publications will be published on this website upon individual consent.
The whole site would probably sound a lot better if the creators were to write complete sentences rather than sentence fragements.
They wrote: "example computational complexities of inverting the function"
Since these are instructions, I suppose sentence fragments are excused (although it would sound better). It would perhaps flow better to say...."examples of the inverting function's computational complexities."
They wrote: "People considering this function interesting are encouraged to share their research results with us at vmpc@vmpcfunction.com. Information about all research results and all publications will be, upon consent, published on this website."
I'd say: We encourage those who are interested in this function to share their own research results with us at vmpc@vmpcfunction.com. Information about all research results and publications will be published on this website upon individual consent.
The whole site would probably sound a lot better if the creators were to write complete sentences rather than sentence fragements.