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How to improve your English writing in 5 minutes© Antimoon.com
Below is an excerpt from Michal's story, but it is purposefully written in an ugly way. Do you find this excerpt pleasant to read?
Today , I can understand the beatles very clearly.Each time I hear a
Beatles song,I am delighted
and proud becouse i have mademy childhood dream come true.
I listen to many rock bands , all in
English,and I listen every day ,sometimes forover seven hours a day.I ma
constantly aware ofmy
success with english because i cna understand the lyrics ofthe
songs i listen to.and taht gives me
pleasure and Satisfaction for many hours every day .
Now you can read the original version of the excerpt. It's the same text but it's much more pleasant to read, don't you think?
Today, I can understand The Beatles very clearly. Each time I hear a
Beatles song, I am delighted and proud because I have made my childhood
dream come true. I listen to many rock bands, all in English, and I listen
every day, sometimes for over seven hours a day. I am constantly aware of
my success with English because I can understand the lyrics of the songs
I listen to. And that gives me pleasure and satisfaction for many hours
every day.
There are three kinds of typing errors in the ugly version:
Today , I can understand
the beatles very
clearly.Each time I hear a
Beatles song,I am delighted
and proud becouse i have
mademy childhood dream come true.
I listen to many rock bands ,
all in English,and I listen every day
,sometimes forover seven hours a day.I
ma constantly aware ofmy
success with english because i
cna understand the
lyrics ofthe songs i
listen to.and taht gives me
pleasure and Satisfaction for many hours every
day .
How to avoid writing in an ugly way
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