Speech Critique

Hey guys,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aORwFi9jm9A

How is my speech? I'm looking to get a voice coach for professional speaking. I need to work on intonation and being able to express a wider range of emotion. I want an informal critique here so I can know how much work my voice needs.

By the way, try to guess my background and where I'm from!

- Howie

Btw, do I have an accent?

seems not bad. But you sound not very confident and you are a little hesitant?

You voice sounds quite like this one
http://www.antimoon.com/forum/f1.htm (title: Do I have an accent?)
I wonder if you two are the same person?

I have to agree.