Dear natives,
Which, in your opinion, sounds better?
(1)
This segment includes 500 companies from the Fortune 500 list published in the fall of 2003. Our promotional activities will be directed at IT directors in these companies.
(2)
This segment includes 500 companies from the Fortune 500 list published in the fall of 2003. Our promotional activities will be directed at IT directors in those companies.
Thanks a lot for your input.
Which, in your opinion, sounds better?
(1)
This segment includes 500 companies from the Fortune 500 list published in the fall of 2003. Our promotional activities will be directed at IT directors in these companies.
(2)
This segment includes 500 companies from the Fortune 500 list published in the fall of 2003. Our promotional activities will be directed at IT directors in those companies.
Thanks a lot for your input.