-Obtained the highest score of Tacheng District in high school entrance examination.
-First prize in National Senior Maths Tournament in Grade 3 in high school.
-First prize in National Senior Maths Tournament in Grade 3 in high school.
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please correct these sentence if there is any improper part
-Obtained the highest score of Tacheng District in high school entrance examination.
-First prize in National Senior Maths Tournament in Grade 3 in high school.
The first phrase is correct gramatically but ambiguous, try:
"Obtained the highest high-school entrance examination score in the Tacheng District" The second phrase is fine, although keep in mind that "maths" is singular in the U. S., i.e., "math," even though it is plural in the U. K. Good luck with your CV. |