"A lovely girl, in possession of the proper dimensions and a friendly attitude, is seeking a job in modeling."
This is not about me, so don't write off-topic comments ;))
This is not about me, so don't write off-topic comments ;))
are the commas places correctly?
Because without them, it turns into a garden path sentence.
"A lovely girl in possession of the proper dimensions and a friendly attitude is seeking a job in modeling."
By the time you finish it, you may get the impression (if only for a moment) that it's the friendly attitude that's doing the seeking. But it's not an very egregious case; I think it's just more easily parsed when it has commas.
"A lovely girl in possession of the proper dimensions and a friendly attitude is seeking a job in modeling."
By the time you finish it, you may get the impression (if only for a moment) that it's the friendly attitude that's doing the seeking. But it's not an very egregious case; I think it's just more easily parsed when it has commas.
Lazar was spot on. I got the same feeling after reading that sentence after commas.