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opened the floodgates
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The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and proved it acceptable, even rewarding, to dive for big dreams.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and left room for dreams.
Which one?
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and left room for dreams.
Which one?
It's an editorial piece ditwad. OP has to change something.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and proved it acceptable, even rewarding, to go in search of their dreams. --I like this one
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and proved it acceptable, even rewarding, to go in search of their dreams. --I like this one
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the buzz of excitement welling up inside him.
Should I change 'welling up' with 'rising'?
the buzz of excitement welling up inside him.
Should I change 'welling up' with 'rising'?
The speech unleashed a tidal wave of inspiration and fostered a myriad of dreams among the oppressed masses.
<<Should I change 'welling up' with 'rising'? >>
It doesn't make a fuck of a difference. Don't fix what ain't broke.
It doesn't make a fuck of a difference. Don't fix what ain't broke.
If you want to continue with the floodgates metaphor, you could say something like "provided fertile ground for dreams".
The speech wrenched open the floodgates of inspiration and allowed wings to take dream.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and allowed for dreams to be dreamt.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and let people have dreams.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and allowed people to have dreams.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and made it possible to dream.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and made dreaming a non-futile engagement.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and made dreams not be a load of shit any more.
The speech made the floodgates of inspiration open and allowed for dreams to be dreamt.
The spoken message opened the floodgates of inspiration and allowed for dreams to be dreamt.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and lifted the moratorium on dreaming.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and allowed for dreams to be dreamt.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and revitalised the art of dreaming.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and allowed people to harbour higher expectations in the actual manifestation of their previously futile dreams.
The speech opened inspiration's floodgates and allowed for dreams to be dreamt.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and permitted dreams to be dreamt.
The speech opened up the floodgates of inspiration and allowed for dreams to be dreamt.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and increased the general expectation for the fruition of dreams.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and let people have dreams.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and allowed people to have dreams.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and made it possible to dream.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and made dreaming a non-futile engagement.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and made dreams not be a load of shit any more.
The speech made the floodgates of inspiration open and allowed for dreams to be dreamt.
The spoken message opened the floodgates of inspiration and allowed for dreams to be dreamt.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and lifted the moratorium on dreaming.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and allowed for dreams to be dreamt.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and revitalised the art of dreaming.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and allowed people to harbour higher expectations in the actual manifestation of their previously futile dreams.
The speech opened inspiration's floodgates and allowed for dreams to be dreamt.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and permitted dreams to be dreamt.
The speech opened up the floodgates of inspiration and allowed for dreams to be dreamt.
The speech opened the floodgates of inspiration and increased the general expectation for the fruition of dreams.
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